Sinful Temptations — The Beginning (Brother/Sister)

This is my first attempt at chat-style erotica. I used to write on Literotica a long time back and my stories did fairly well. This is just an extension of that.

https://imgchest.com/p/ljyqmpvd725

I'm looking for honest feedback. If it's shit, I want to make sure I do better. So, feel free to be as brutal as you want!

Also, the model is Cara and is a lovely person.

Make sure you check her out at:

u/creamypear

Her OnlyFans:

https://www.onlyfans.com/creamypear

Hope you enjoy the story. There's a lot more to come.