Okay I was going to do some rewrites but no longer going to have the time this weekend. Here are the last three parts of the the story. All feedback is welcome.
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This was all done in a rush with very little editing. Let me know in the comments what you think. The good and the bad. Here are some questions but say whatever in the comments.
Was Dan the right choice at the midway point?
Did the story lose some of its grounding as it progressed?
What would you have changed?
Part 1: https://imgchest.com/p/n87wmwzqx4x
Part 2: https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq2ngpxy2
Part 3: https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq2nglky2
Part 4: https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrlpdveyp
Part 5: https://imgchest.com/p/5xy22wb2jyl (unmute the voice call)
Part 6: https://imgchest.com/p/bp45mkpeqy5
Part 7: https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrar62l4p
Part 8: https://imgchest.com/p/qe4gmvzdq4j
Part 9:https://imgchest.com/p/lqyedj5e37d (unmute the voice call)
Edit: The point where an alternative story could have happened https://imgchest.com/p/5xy22w3k3yl (unmute the voice call). Updated comment next to links that there is a voice call.
This was all done in a rush with very little editing. Let me know in the comments what you think. The good and the bad. Here are some questions but say whatever in the comments.
Was Dan the right choice at the midway point?
Did the story lose some of its grounding as it progressed?
What would you have changed?
Part 1: https://imgchest.com/p/n87wmwzqx4x
Part 2: https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq2ngpxy2
Part 3: https://imgchest.com/p/ljyq2nglky2
Part 4: https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrlpdveyp
Part 5: https://imgchest.com/p/5xy22wb2jyl
Part 6: https://imgchest.com/p/bp45mkpeqy5
Part 7: https://imgchest.com/p/6eyrar62l4p
Part 8: https://imgchest.com/p/qe4gmvzdq4j
Part 9:https://imgchest.com/p/lqyedj5e37d